concentration breakdown

im losing hope

waiting for answers to come

im drowning in this abyss

of desperation

im calling for more action

focus!

that’s what i badly need

more time?

no

this night is all i need

come on, come

help me out here

i badly need you

22 thoughts on “concentration breakdown

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