i was inspired to write this while listening to OPM songs π
oh woah oh
we’ve grown apart all these years
we used to be forever
but now it’s no longer
you’re wishing it’s still the same
but darling I’ve changed
nothing is forever
and nothing stays the same
stop wishing you could turn back time
stop hurting, your heart’s not mine
our story’s not forever
stop waiting, it’s over
Sounds like it would make a great song. The last line is very powerful!
J.R.
Nice done.
nothing lasts forever; sometimes, love’s just not meant to be.
well packed powerful words in this beautiful poetry/song π
Rally Week 41 – My Poetry
sad, and sounds like a song
The brush off is so much nice as a poem than a text message! haha!
very true. although I never want to believe the discussed myself :(. Good job!
a sad song …
well done..
Glad to have you in the rally, have fun.
π
well done.
i can relate to this one….my old fiance of 20 years ago is hanging on to old memories. This poem is how I feel every odd occasion I run into him. well done.
Woah, this packs a punch. It’s sad the way we sometimes believe ‘forever’, and then one (or both) realise it isn’t … but the hope is always in new beginnings. Your writing struck a chord with me. Thanks for sharing π